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Sunday, March 27, 2011

Nearly *Sunday Scribblings*

I came to you 'as is',
nearly dead.
You nursed me,
you loved me,
showed me that almost dieing wasn't the end.
Now I sit in this empty room,
waiting for you,
thinking of your promises.
Did you break them,
or just nearly keep them?


  1. A very nice response to the Sunday Scribbling.

  2. This little piece conjures up a number of scenarios. My immediate thought was of a pet saved from a dog or cats home. Either way saving a life often puts the rescuer under an obligation, doesn't it?

    P.S. May I suggest 'dying' as the correct spelling?

  3. OOOh very neat ending and nice play on "nearly". Thanks.

  4. Waiting for someone to fulfil a promise is the emptiest room in the world..maybe some of those things we can fulfil ourselves..Jae